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Genesis 18:10  
And He said, “I will surely return to you at this time next year; and behold, Sarah your wife will have a son.” And Sarah was listening at the tent door which was behind him.And he said, “I will surely return to you at this time next year; and behold, Sarah your wife will have a son.” And Sarah was listening at the tent door which was behind him.Capitalized ‘h’ in “he”
Leviticus 11:16  
and the ostrich and the owl and the gull and the hawk in its kind,and the ostrich and the owl and the sea gull and the hawk in its kind,Changed “sea gull” to “gull”
Leviticus 18:23  
Also you shall not lie with any animal to be defiled with it, nor shall any woman stand before an animal to mate with it; it is a perversion.Also you shall not lie with any animal to be made unclean with it, nor shall any woman stand before an animal to mate with it; it is a perversion.Changed “to be made unclean” to “to be defiled”
Leviticus 18:25  
So the land has become defiled, and I have brought its punishment upon it. And the land has vomited out its inhabitants.So the land has become unclean, and I have brought its punishment upon it. And the land has vomited out its inhabitants.Changed “has become unclean” to “has become defiled”
Leviticus 18:28  
so that the land will not vomit you out, should you defile it, as it has vomited out the nation which has been before you.so that the land will not vomit you out, should you make it unclean, as it has vomited out the nation which has been before you.Replaced “make it unclean” with “defile it”
Numbers 5:19  
Then the priest shall have her swear an oath and shall say to the woman, “If no man has lain with you, and if you have not gone astray into defilement, being under the authority of your husband, be free from this water of bitterness that brings curses;Then the priest shall have her swear an oath and shall say to the woman, “If no man has lain with you, and if you have not gone astray into uncleanness, being under the authority of your husband, be free from this water of bitterness that brings curses;Changed “into uncleanness” to “into defilement”
Numbers 19:13  
Anyone who touches a corpse, the body of a man who has died, and does not purify himself, makes the tabernacle of Yahweh unclean; and that person shall be cut off from Israel. Because the water for impurity was not splashed on him, he shall be unclean; his uncleanness is still on him.Anyone who touches a corpse, the body of a man who has died, and does not purify himself, defiles the tabernacle of Yahweh; and that person shall be cut off from Israel. Because the water for impurity was not splashed on him, he shall be unclean; his uncleanness is still on him.Changed “defiles the tabernacle of Yahweh” to “makes the tabernacle of Yahweh unclean”
Numbers 19:20  
‘But the man who is unclean and does not purify himself from uncleanness, that person shall be cut off from the midst of the assembly because he has made the sanctuary of Yahweh unclean; the water for impurity has not been splashed on him; he is unclean.‘But the man who is unclean and does not purify himself from uncleanness, that person shall be cut off from the midst of the assembly because he has defiled the sanctuary of Yahweh; the water for impurity has not been splashed on him; he is unclean.Changed “defiled the sanctuary of Yahweh” to “made the sanctuary of Yahweh unclean”
Deuteronomy 14:15  
and the ostrich, the owl, the gull, and the hawk in their kinds,and the ostrich, the owl, the sea gull, and the hawk in their kinds,Changed “sea gull” to “gull”
1 Samuel 10:20  
Thus Samuel brought all the tribes of Israel near, and the tribe of Benjamin was taken by lot.Thus Samuel brought all the tribes of Israel near, and the tribe of Benjamin was taken by lot.Italicized “by lot”
1 Chronicles 1:9  
The sons of Cush were Seba, Havilah, Sabta, Raama, and Sabteca;
and the sons of Raama were Sheba and Dedan.
The sons of Cush were Seba, Havilah, Sabta, Raamah, and Sabteca; and the sons of Raama were Sheba and Dedan.Removed the h from the name Raamah
2 Chronicles 1:15
The king also made silver and gold as plentiful as stones in Jerusalem, and he made cedars as plentiful as sycamore trees that are in the Shephelah.The king also made silver and gold as plentiful as stones in Jerusalem, and he made cedars as plentiful as sycamores trees that are in the Shephelah.Remove the “s” from sycamore
2 Chronicles 29:25  
He then caused the Levites to stand in the house of Yahweh with cymbals, with harps, and with lyres, according to the command of David and of Gad the king’s seer, and of Nathan the prophet; for the command was from Yahweh by the hand of His prophets.He then caused the Levites to stand in the house of Yahweh with cymbals, with harps, and with lyres, according to the command of David and of Gad the king’s seer, and of Nathan the prophet; for the command was from Yahweh by the hand His prophets.Added “of” before “His prophets”
2 Chronicles 33:25  
Then the people of the land struck down all those who had conspired against King Amon, and the people of the land made Josiah his son king in his place.Then the people of the land struck down all the those who had conspired against King Amon, and the people of the land made Josiah his son king in his place.Deleted “the” before “those”
2 Chronicles 35:21
But Neco sent messengers to him, saying, “What have I to do with you, O King of Judah? I am not coming against you today but against the house with which I am at war, and God has said for me to hurry. Stop for your own sake from interfering with God who is with me, so that He will not bring you to ruin.”But Neco sent messengers to him, saying, “What have I have to do with you, O King of Judah? I am not coming against you today but against the house with which I am at war, and God has said for me to hurry. Stop for your own sake from interfering with God who is with me, so that He will not bring you to ruin.”Deleted “have” after “I”.
2 Chronicles 35:25  
Then Jeremiah chanted a lament for Josiah. And all the male and female singers speak about Josiah in their lamentations to this day. And they made them a statute in Israel; behold, they are also written in the lamentations.Then Jeremiah chanted a lament for Josiah. And all the male and female singers speak about Josiah in their lamentations to this day. And they made them a statute in Israel; behold, they are also written in the lamentations.Italicized “lament”
Psalm 45  
For the choir director. According to Shoshannim. Of the sons of Korah. A Maskil. A Song of Love.For the choir director. According to the Shoshannim. Of the sons of Korah. A Maskil. A Song of Love.Deleted “the” from the phrase “the Shoshannim”
Song of Songs 8:4  
“I call you to solemnly swear, O daughters of Jerusalem,
Why should you arouse or awaken my love
Until she pleases?”
“I call you to solemnly swear, O daughters of Jerusalem,
Why should you arouse or awaken my love
Until she pleases.”
Changed period to question mark
Isaiah 30:10  
Who say to the seers, “You must not see,”
And to those who have visions, “You must not behold visions for us of what is right,
Speak to us pleasant words,
Behold visions of illusions.
Who say to the seers, “You must not see”,
And to the those who have visions, “You must not behold visions for us of what is right,
Speak to us pleasant words,
Behold visions of illusions.
Deleted “the” before “those”; comma moved inside quotation marks
Jeremiah 3:19  
“Then I said,
‘How I would set you among My sons
And give you a pleasant land,
The most beautiful inheritance of the nations!’
And I said, ‘You shall call Me, “My Father,”
And not turn away from following Me.’
“Then I said,
‘How I would set you among My sons
And give you a pleasant land,
The most beautiful inheritance of the nations!’
And I said, ‘You shall call Me, My Father,
And not turn away from following Me.’
Added quotes around “My Father”
Jeremiah 51:31  
One runner runs to meet another,
And one messenger to meet another,
To give a message to the king of Babylon
That his city has been captured from end to end;
One runner runs to meet another,
And one messenger to meet another,
To give a message the king of Babylon
That his city has been captured from end to end;
Added “to” after message: “TO the king of Babylon”
Ezekiel 1:19  
And when the living creatures went, the wheels went beside them. And when the living creatures rose from the earth, the wheels rose also.And when the living creatures went, the wheels went besides them. And when the living creatures rose from the earth, the wheels rose also.Changed “besides” to “beside.”
Ezekiel 39:28  
Then they will know that I am Yahweh their God because I made them go into exile among the nations, and then collected them again to their own land; and I will leave none of them there any longer.Then they will know that I am Yahweh their God because I made them go into exile among the nations, and then collect them again to their own land; and I will leave none of them there any longer.Changed “collect” to “collected”
Ezekiel 43:15  
And the altar hearth shall be four cubits; and from the altar hearth shall extend upwards four horns.And the altar hearth shall be four cubits; and from the altar hearth shall extend upwards four horns.Italicized the second ‘shall’
Daniel 4:17  
This edict is by the resolution of the watchers,
And the decision is a command of the holy ones,
In order that the living may know
That the Most High is the powerful ruler over the kingdom of mankind
And gives it to whom He wishes
And sets up over it the lowliest of men.”
This edict is by the resolution of the watchers,
And the decision is a command of the holy ones,
In order that the living may know
That the Most High is the powerful ruler over the kingdom of mankind
And gives it to whom He wishes
And sets it up over it the lowliest of men.”
Changed “Sets it up over the lowliest of men” to “Sets up over it the lowliest of men”
Haggai 1:3  
Then the word of Yahweh came by the hand of Haggai the prophet, saying,Then the word of Yahweh came by Haggai the prophet, saying,“by Haggai” changed to “by the hand of Haggai”
Zechariah 10:4  
From them will come the cornerstone,
From them the tent peg,
From them the bow of battle,
From them every good taskmaster, all of them together.
From them will come the cornerstone,
From them the tent peg,
From them the bow of battle,
From them every good taskmaster, all of them together.
Italicized the whole phrase “all of them”
Matthew 22:35  
And one of them, a scholar of the Law, asked Him a question, testing Him,And one of them, a scholar of the Law, asked Him a question, testing Him,Unitalicized “a question”; italicized “him”
Matthew 24:29  
“But immediately after the tribulation of those days the sun will be darkened, and the moon will not give its light, and the stars will fall from the sky, and the POWERS OF THE HEAVENS will be shaken.“But immediately after the tribulation of those days the sun will be darkened, and the moon will not give its light, and the stars will fall from the sky, and the powers of the heavens will be shaken.“Powers of the heavens” changed to small caps
Mark 7:3  
(For the Pharisees and all the Jews do not eat unless they carefully wash their hands, thus observing the tradition of the elders;(For the Pharisees and all the Jews do not eat unless they carefully wash their hands, thus observing the traditions of the elders;Change “traditions” to “tradition”
Luke 21:26  
men fainting from fear and the expectation of the things which are coming upon the world; for the POWERS OF THE HEAVENS will be shaken.men fainting from fear and the expectation of the things which are coming upon the world; for the powers of the heavens will be shaken.“Powers of the heavens” changed to small caps
John 6:61
But Jesus, knowing in Himself that His disciples were grumbling at this, said to them, “Does this cause you to stumble?But Jesus, knowing that His disciples were grumbling at this, said to them, “Does this cause you to stumble?Added “in himself” after “knowing”
Hebrews 3:5  
Now MOSES WAS FAITHFUL IN ALL HIS HOUSE AS A SERVANT, for a testimony of those things which were to be spoken later,Now MOSES WAS FAITHFUL IN ALL HIS HOUSE AS A SERVANT, for a testimony of those things which were to be spoken later,Capitalized ‘h’ in “his”
   
   
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Example: Exodus 24
Current Language: Yahweh Cuts His Covenant with Israel Former Language: Israel Confirms Their Covenant with Yahweh